Friday, August 10, 2012

Reflective essay-'What adults can learn from kids'

  Do you know the presentation video called 'What adults can learn from kids'?
It's a presentation about between adults and kids.
And it's very interesting and strange because she is 12 years old child, but she did really nice presentation.

  In this presentation, her opinion is that adults have to learn from kids.
And I really agree about this opinion.
And I also agree that kids sometimes can do our own opinion with three reasons.
  To start with, we are not machines. I think some adults think that kids are machines.
So, we have to do everything whatever adults order to us.
I think that's not a good habit because they have to consider is because we are all human.
  Moreover, kids are even very smart.
Kids sometimes think very well because kids don't have any complex thinking about the world or government problems. So, they are very free. So, they can think great idea.
Also, their thinking is very wide and awesome. Do you know the book named 'The little prince'?
In that book, kid drew a picture that snack eat the elephant.
But adults think that it is just a hat. It's the same thing. Kids think very wide but adults can't learn anything
from that . They just think what they want to think.
  Furthermore, kids can see and find well.
In this time, this doesn't mean finding the book or pencil. It means they find what adults can't.
Kids can't think about world is sometimes bad or unfair. So they can see everything good.
But adults are not. They already know many things. So, they know the bad things.
And adults are always tired. They work hard amd many duties.
Actually, most adults can't think that insects are handsome.
But kids really like insects like beatles or butterfly. And adults don't wamt to play with nature but kids really like to play and live with nature. Well, some adults do but they are not even like kids.
So, kids can learn different thing. It is not same as school study.
So, adults can't know about that learning.
So, adults have to learn from kids.

  These are the three reasons of my opinion, why do adults have to learn from kids.
Kids have free and wide mind. So, I hope that adult consider our opinion and learn from us.
Understand each other and talk, consider the others opinion will grew up the world.
But the problem is we are the kids now, but we will become an adult in the future.
And we don't have to forget the thinking about when we was a kids.
And we have to understand and consider their opinion because we already know that kids think wide and free. If we never think about that, kids will feel the same as what we feels now.

1 comment:

  1. This essay needs to be better structured. It should have an introduction, body and conclusion. Organize your writing into paragraphs, not sentences on separate lines.

    Reflective essays also should have examples from your personal life that are related to the video. Keep trying!

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